26考研 英语有道写作基础代练05

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📖课程资料内容总结:
📚 非谓语与问句结构写作精讲
🎯 课程聚焦:非谓语+问句结构在写作中的高阶应用场景 |
🌰 实例解析:传统节日描写|科技话题论述 |
- 📈 词汇深度积累 → 表达多样性提升
- ✍️ 作文质量优化 → 分数突破关键
🧩 非谓语动词的三种形式与用法
语法体系:
① 不定式 (to do) | 表目的/结果 |
② 现在分词 (doing) | 表主动/进行 |
③ 过去分词 (done) | 表被动/完成 |
✨ 简化策略: | 状语从句→分词结构 | 定语从句→分词短语 |
🔄 转换示例: | "When she saw the news, she cried" → Seeing the news, she cried |
✍️ 非谓语动词在写作中的应用
✅ 核心价值:突破简单句堆砌,打造紧凑高级表达 |
- ⚠️ 主动关系 → 用现在分词 (doing)
- ⚠️ 被动关系 → 用过去分词 (done)
例句分析:
误: He stood there and watched the sunset.
正: He stood there, watching the sunset.
误: He stood there and watched the sunset.
正: He stood there, watching the sunset.
⚖️ 非谓语与从句使用解析
⛓ 黄金规则:单句仅容一套主谓结构 |
- ❌ 非谓语与从句混用(例:
Walking in the park, when I met a friend) - ❌ 时态不一致(例:
Having finished work, he goes home yesterday)
① 确定主干谓语 → 其余动作非谓语化 |
② 检查时间逻辑 → 完成式表先后(having done) |
✂️ 英语写作技巧与非谓语结构
转换技术:
⤵️ 从句→非谓语 | 定语从句→分词短语 | 状语从句→独立结构 |
- 💎 清晰度提升:减少连词嵌套
- 🌀 流畅性增强:避免主谓割裂
实战案例:
"Because she was inspired by the story, she wrote a novel" →
Inspired by the story, she wrote a novel
"Because she was inspired by the story, she wrote a novel" →
Inspired by the story, she wrote a novel
🧱 非谓语与with结构详解
🚨 核心场景:逻辑主语 ≠ 句子主语时 |
with + 名词/代词 | +非谓语/形容词/介词短语 |
- 🌉 衔接主从动作:With the rain falling heavily, we canceled the picnic
- 🎭 描述伴随状态:She slept with the window open
🚀 考研英语学习与写作技巧
🔥 核心理念:理论结合实践 |
- ✋ 拒绝空谈:每日仿写3个非谓语句式
- 🔍 易混词辨析:obtain(获取实物) vs attain(达成目标)
教师寄语:
"英语如建筑,简洁结构是基石,语法精准是钢筋——动手建造方见真章"
"英语如建筑,简洁结构是基石,语法精准是钢筋——动手建造方见真章"
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